Mid-Term Test :)

 Hello everybody,

I'd like to inform the mid-term test :)

  • You have one week to complete your mid-term test
  • Next week is your submission deadline (Friday, Nov 11, 2022 at noon (12 PM), so it is FREE (no class, just submit it online)
  • You post your work here, in the comment box below.
  • if you have any difficulties to post it, you can send PM to the lecturer
  • Please don't be late, it will decrease your points
  • It is individual work
  • The test will be:
            1. The second paragraph or the continued paragraph of your last paragraph

            2. It must contain: (a) a topic which is still linked with your previous paragraph; (b) 1 main idea (at the first sentence of you paragraph);  (c) minimally 2 supporting sentences, and (d) minimally 1 concluding sentence

            3. The assessment: content (5 points), grammar (1 point), vocabulary (1 point), punctuality (1 point), reference (1 point) = 9 points 

  • Example:
(a) Definition of humanistic teaching

(b) There are two studies talks about humanistic teaching. (c) First, a research on humanizing online teaching for higher education equity (Pacansky-Brock et al., 2019). The research produces six humanizing strategies for online teaching, which aims to teacher’s professional development and support the implementation of humane online teaching. Second, learning English also needs to humanize education as in Slovakia (Lojova, 2016). In his research, he is looking for more effective ways to teach English as a foreign language. There, traditional teaching is still dominant in many public schools. This should be replaced by more student-centered teaching of English. (d) Both of the studies are supporting the implementation of humanistic teaching, and even in teaching a foreign language.

GOOD LUCK!





Comments

  1. Sofya Nadya Salma Arifin
    KKI-23030210082

    (a) The solution that women have the same rights as men.
    (b) There are several solutions for women to have the same rights as men is to provide a place to learn about leadership. (c) General Chairperson of the Indonesian Women's Congress (KOWANI), Giwo Rubianto said KOWANI will continue to make various efforts, one of which is socialization related to increasing women's leadership capacity to play an active role in development. Leadership learning such as through socialization can equip women in their leadership and realize the importance of growing their interest in fighting for the right to lead. Many women are still not aware of the importance of women in organizations. Women bring their own point of view and distinctive traits into the organization, so that their presence is able to enrich pluralism in the organization and leadership (Betti, 2017).
    (d) With this socialization about women's leadership, it is hoped that Indonesian women and their future generations will be aware, capable, and brave in fighting for their leadership rights.

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  2. Zulfa Nur Fatati
    kki-23030210036

    (a). Mental health problems if not consulted
    (b). According to dr. Fadhli Rizal Mukarim(17 November 2020) on the Helodoc website that I visited. Various mental health disorders can be dangerous if left untreated.
    (c). First, the Dangerous Impact of Schizophrenia. Schizophrenia is a mental disorder that occurs in the long term. Schizophrenia makes sufferers experience delusions, hallucinations, confusion in thinking, isolate themselves from others, to experience changes in behavior. If left untreated, schizophrenia can lead to aggressive behavior, depression, suicide attempts, social isolation, to alcohol or drug abuse. According to the World Health Organization (WHO), people with schizophrenia have a 2-3 times higher risk of dying early than those who do not have it. In addition, there is no cure for schizophrenia completely. However, there are therapies in the form of psychosocial treatments or effective rehabilitation so that people with schizophrenia have productive, successful, and independent lives. Second, depression can lead to death The effects of depression include:

    1. Being overweight or obese causes heart disease and diabetes.
    2. Trigger physical illness.
    3. Abuse of alcohol or drugs.
    4. Anxiety, panic disorder, or social phobia.
    5. Family conflicts, relationship difficulties, and work or school problems.
    6. Social isolation.
    7. The emergence of feelings of suicidal ideation.
    The third,early death due to medical conditions.
    According to experts at the National Institutes of Health, chronic stress can cause various physical problems, including high blood pressure, heart disease, diabetes, obesity, depression or anxiety, skin problems, such as acne or eczema, and other problems. menstruation. Finally, PTSD Triggers Other Mental Health Disorders Post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) is a mental condition triggered by a tragic event that someone has experienced or witnessed. PSD can trigger complications such as:
    1. Difficulties or problems in work or relationships.
    2. High risk of heart disease.
    3. More likely to develop chronic disease 4. Changes that affect the brain, include higher levels of the hormone cortisol and decreased size of the hippocampus - a brain structure important in memory and emotion processing.
    (d) What needs to be underlined is that many other mental disorders can harm psychologically and physically, if not handled properly. Therefore, someone who has a mental disorder needs to consult mental health and get professional help to overcome the problems they face.

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  3. 1. Parenting is something important and can shape the character of a child.
    2. Because the child can model behaviors and habits from what he sees and knows.
    3. The characteristics of a child that need to be considered and developed include curiosity, social ability, problem-solving ability, creativity, empathy, humility, and also self-confidence. Therefore, parenting is needed to be an example for the child as well as help the child's development. Because from what they see, they will know and understand. Some examples of teaching self-confidence include teaching dare to apologize, dare to thank you, ask others, courtesy to parents, and so on.
    This plays an important role in children, because in addition to the character of a child being formed, traits and behaviors begin to be seen and honed.

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  5. (a) Bullying effects on the victims
     
    (b) Bullying has some serious effects on the victim. (c) First, it will affect the victim’s mental health and well-being, such as anxiety and depression, and it will also cause the victim to have suicidal thoughts. Second, bullying affects the victim’s ability to socialize with other people. They are going to have low self-esteem, which can make it difficult for them to make friends or participate in social occasions. Third, bullying can also affect someone physically. When someone is receiving constant bullying behavior, they will start losing appetite, and there will be a change in their sleeping behavior. It is clear that this will eventually put the victim in serious health danger, especially if it keeps happening for a long time. (d) Therefore, it's crucial to address bullying and its effects so that we can save someone's life.

    (Alfatihah Dwi P_0074_08.40)

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  6. (a) The effects of bullying on student's academic and social life
    (b) Bullying has negative impacts on student's academic and social life. (c) In academic life (students may have difficulty concentrating, leading to poor academic performance, feeling irritable and constantly alert to their surroundings, which can cause anxiety and eventually depression, which can leave students vulnerable in school. During school time, forcing children to miss school, which can affect their studies and their future.). And it also has impact in someone's social life (social isolation, low self-esteem and lack of confidence, and difficulty to form a postive relationship). (d) In conclusion, bullying has a lot of negative impacts on someone's academic and social life, hence why bullying needs to be stopped.
    (Nafian Rahma Fitriyani_0076_08.40)

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  7. A). Dangerous bullying poses a severe threat to the well-being and emotional stability of its victims, leading to long-lasting psychological and physical consequences

    Bullying can cause victims to experience anxiety, depression, and low self-esteem, affecting their academic performance and overall social development also In order to create a safer and healthier environment for everyone, it is crucial for communities to actively address and prevent bullying, fostering empathy, understanding, and kindness among individuals And other people have to be sensitive

    (Malik Maulana Ibrohim_0061_9:44)

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  8. (a) Bullying without " awareness"

    (b) Bullying without" awareness", also known as "passive bullying" or "indirect bullying," is a form of harmful behavior or harassment towards someone without them being directly aware of it. (c) It involves actions that are more hidden or indirect than physical actions or harsh words. Bullying without " awareness"is often more difficult to identify and may affect victims without them being aware of the source of the abuse. This can be detrimental to the victim's mental and emotional well-being.There are many factors that can make someone do bullying without awareness, one of which is like a habit, if they (the bullies) are used to doing harmful things without realizing it and causing them to also not be fully aware when they are bullying.(d) In conclusion, bullying carried out with awareness or without awareness will both have a traumatizing effect on the victims, and the bad habits of the perpetrators can trigger a lot of bullying without awareness.

    ( Ambarwati _0072 _08.40 )

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  9. RIZKA ARIFATUL ULYA
    23030220055/3B TBI
    PBW: Friday, November 3rd, 2023 (08.40)

    (a) Gen Z fashion is characterized by several key elements that set it apart from previous generations.
    (b) Gen Z fashion is characterized by a desire for individuality, inclusivity, and sustainability. (c) Gen Z values individuality and self-expression, using fashion as a medium to showcase their unique identities (Francis & Hoefel, 2018). (c) Gen Z challenges the notion of binary gender norms and encourages inclusivity and fluidity in fashion (Schneider & Lee, 2022). They are not afraid to experiment with different styles and silhouettes, regardless of gender norms. (c)Environmental consciousness is a significant driving force behind Gen Z fashion choices. This generation prioritizes sustainability and ethical fashion practices, opting for labels that choose eco-friendly materials and ethical labor practices (Huff, 2023). (d) In conclusion, Gen Z fashion is characterized by individuality, inclusivity, and sustainability, challenging binary gender norms and embracing fluidity. This generation values self-expression, experimenting with styles, and prioritizing environmental consciousness, opting for eco-friendly materials and ethical labor practices, setting it apart from previous generations.

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  10. (a) Gamelan is a traditional music ensemble in Indonesia
    (b) Gamelan itself is a traditional musical instrument that is often found in various parts of Indonesia, such as Java, Bali, Madura and Lombok. (c) The term gamelan Java generally refers to gamelan in Central Java. The musical instrument is believed to have existed in Java since 404 AD. It can be seen from the depictions of the past in the relief of the Borobudur and Prambanan temple. UNESCO states that gamelan's philosophy is mora than a performance. Gamelan also serves as a means of cultural expression as well as building connections between humans and the universe. UNESCO also considers that orchestral gamelan teaches the values of respect, love and care for each other. (d) In conclusion, outside there are many other Indonesian cultural heritage that is ready to be known by the world. Therefore, do not let those cultures be forgottrn and disappear without being inherited.

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  11. (a) Gen Z consumes content from social media

    (b) Gen Z tends to consume content from social media in a different way than previous generations. (c) Apps like TikTok and Instagram Reels are very popular among Gen Z because they present content in short video formats that are easy to consume and share. Gen Z tends to look for content that feels more authentic and personal, such as content created by other users or smaller influencers who are closer to their audience. Even though social media is not a trusted news source, Gen Z tends to use social media platforms to consume the latest news and information. (d) Gen Z uses social media as a means to express themselves and share their views on various topics.

    ( Fina Ainurrohmah_056_08.40 )

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  12. (a) Self-development

    (b) Commitment to becoming an ideal student academic. (c) First, commitment plays a crucial role in academic success as it provides the motivation to excel in studies. Students committed to their educational goals tend to be more diligent in their efforts to achieve them. Second, commitment also fosters perseverance in the face of challenges. Ideal students don't easily give up but demonstrate a strong commitment to overcoming obstacles in their academic pursuits. For example, an exemplary student consistently attends classes, completes assignments on time, and endeavors to comprehend complex subjects. (d) This level of dedication is a clear demonstration of their commitment to academic excellence.

    Muhammad Arief Wijayanto_0040_P-B-W_08.40

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  15. (a) The strong history in cultural traditions of gambyong dance.
    (b) The history and the symbol of fertility blessings in gambyong dance.
    (c) Gambyong dance is not only a physical movement or performance, but also an expression of history, identity, and cultural heritage. The strong history in the cultural tradition of Gambyong dance refers to the close value it has with the history, norms, and cultural values of the Surakarta community, such as its role in traditional ceremonies or rituals. History and culture also influence the development of Gambyong dance which is thick with Javanese culture. Local cultural influences, such as folklore, mythology, and social norms, are closely linked to the development of this dance. By maintaining strong Javanese cultural values, Gambyong dance can be a physical performance, as well as a cultural heritage that enriches the identity and cultural expression of Javanese people.
    (d) In conclusion, gambyong dance reflects the historical values, identity and cultural heritage of Javanese society. The influence of Javanese culture and local culture can affect the development of this dance. Gambyong dance can also be a cultural heritage that enriches the nation's identity.

    (Ayudya Panca Inggitasukma _060_08.40)

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  16. (A) "Love is about give and take" means that love in a relationship involves both partners contributing and receiving. It's a mutual exchange of care, support, and affection. Each person gives love and attention to their partner while also receiving love and affection in return. This balance is essential for a healthy and fulfilling relationship, where both individuals feel valued and supported. It's not one-sided but rather a shared experience of giving and receiving love. (B) Love is a living thing, like a plant or an animal. Love gives without expectation of return. But as you learned in American history, if you grow only one crop in the soil, after a couple of years, nothing much will grow there until the soil gets new nutrients. Love is like that, it gives without expectation of return, but if it is not fed and cared for, it dies after a while. Love doesn't keep score, but maybe it should. (C) A relationship cannot be separated from reciprocal conditions. In family relationships, friendships, companionship, and romance – everything requires a reciprocal response so that the relationship can run in harmony. In short, the existence of a relationship means that a 'reciprocal relationship' has been established between the parties involved in the relationship. (D) Love requires you to give and not take (you can receive love). If that's the premise, then love between two people requires each of you to give. The taking part is not voluntary, but it's given to you and you take.
    (Silvi Zaki Syarifiana_0052_08.40)

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  18. (a)Gen Z digital business are transforming the consumer landscape and creating new opportunities for businesses.(b) Gen Z digital business are transforming the corporate culture and creating new opportunities for businesses. They prioritize innovation, social impact, and work-life balance, and they are changing what it means to be in business.(c) Gen Z is leading the shift in behavior with their digital fluency, and they are articulating a new paradigm for digital. They are comfortable with moving fast and breaking barriers, and they are keen to pursue increased risk and reward.(d) Gen Z's digital fluency, individuality, and entrepreneurial spirit are transforming the consumer landscape and creating new opportunities for businesses. They prioritize innovation, social impact, and work-life balance, and they are changing what it means to be in business. Gen Z's natural affinity for technology and digital fluency are opening doors to new possibilities for innovation and entrepreneurship
    (Hafif Ramadani Sriwikrama_0048_08.40)

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  19. (a) Characteristics of ondel-ondel.

    (b) Ondel-ondel is one of the traditional Indonesian art forms from Betawi that captivates attention with its unique characteristics. (c) Ondel-ondel are usually dressed in traditional clothing. Ondel-ondel are made from simple materials such as bamboo, cloth and paint and decorated with traditional ornaments. They are shaped like giant human puppets with expressive faces, displaying the signature expression of the artist who created them. The clothes worn by ondel-ondels are also distinctive, with brightly colored long shirts and gold accents, and sarongs tied in a distinctive way. But not a few children are afraid of ondel-ondel. Children may be afraid of ondel-ondel because of its large and creepy physical characteristics. The ondel-ondel's expressive face, often looking threatening or scary, can strike fear in children who have vivid imaginations. In addition, the loud noise or rumbling produced by the ondel-ondel when it moves or is hit by its handler can also add to the fear. (d) Characteristic of the ondel-ondel, the ondel-ondel represents Betawi culture and inspires appreciation of Indonesian traditional arts, although children are often frightened by the frightening appearance of the ondel-ondel.

    (Katrine Ananda Sardiyosa_059_08.40)

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  20. (a) The function of gambyong dance.
    (b) Gambyong dance is role as a traditional Javanese dance form that embodies cultural and artistic expressions, often performed during significant events and celebrations in Java, Indonesia.
    (c) _First,_ Gambyong dance has several functions, one of which is as a means of entertainment. Gambyong dance will be staged or performed when there is a state birthday, a wedding party or at the staging of a competition event. That way, the audience who see Gambyong dance will be entertained and the event becomes more crowded. _Second,_ Gambyong dance functions as a ceremonial tool. There are two kinds of ceremonies involving dance, namely ceremonies that are sacred or religious in nature, and traditional ceremonies. In its implementation, dance also plays a role as a complement or media in it.
    (d) In conclusion, Gambyong dance is not just a regional dance, but has many functions in Indonesian culture. Therefore, it is our duty to continue to preserve this dance so that it will not be forgotten by the next generation.

    (Nadaa Nailussa'dah_068_08.40)

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  21. (a) Forest fires due to the long dry season occurred on the mountain slopes.
    (b) The forest in the Mount Merbabu National Park area is one of the forest areas that is vulnerable to fire, especially during the dry season.
    (c) The volunteer community must strengthen steps to anticipate forest fires on the slopes of Mount Merbabu.
    To support steps to prevent and anticipate forest fires on the slopes of Merbabu, various equipment must be prepared to handle forest fires.
    One of these tools is a water storage tank measuring 3 x 1.5 meters which has been prepared to collect rainwater which can be used to handle forest fires on the slopes of Merbabu.
    (d) Forest fires caused by natural factors on mountain slopes occur suddenly. Therefore, we as humans must prepare fire handling tools so that the fire can be extinguished quickly and does not cause too great a loss.
    Zahra Amalia Putri -TBI 3B -(23030220046).

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  23. Trista Ayu Farasya
    027/3A TBI

    A.)Mobility, we can conduct research and read journals while on the go or when you are not in front of a computer.
    B.)Mobility allows us to conduct research and read journals while on the go or when we are not in front of a computer. C.) With the advancement of technology, we can now access research articles and journals from our mobile devices.¹ This means that we can access scholarly articles and publications from anywhere, at any time, as long as we have a mobile device and an internet connection.² Many academic journals, such as Research in Social Stratification and Mobility and Journal of Urban Mobility, are available on platforms like ScienceDirect.com and Emerald Insight, which can be accessed through mobile devices.³ D.) This has made it easier for people to stay up-to-date with the latest research and findings, even when they are not in front of a computer.¹ The ability to access scholarly articles and publications through mobile devices has made it easier for researchers and academics to stay up-to-date with the latest research and conduct research from anywhere in the world.²

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  24. a). "The Importance of Maintaining South Sumatra's Traditional Culinary in the Modern Era."

    b). South Sumatra's traditional culinary is not only a rich cultural heritage, but also an inseparable part of cultural identity that must be maintained and preserved amidst the progress of the modern era.
    c) Maintaining South Sumatra's traditional culinary in the modern era is not just about maintaining unique flavors and tastes, but also plays an important role in maintaining cultural identity and maintaining heritage so that it remains relevant in an ever-evolving era. Amidst the huge influence of technology in today's culinary world, it provides an opportunity for the people of South Sumatra to preserve the uniqueness of their cuisine and introduce it to the international level. The application of modern technology in the preservation of South Sumatra's traditional cuisine can help improve the efficiency of production, distribution and marketing, thus ensuring the sustainability of the culinary heritage amidst the challenges of the times.

    d). By understanding and applying the importance of preserving South Sumatra's traditional cuisine in the modern era, we can safeguard our rich cultural heritage and ensure that its uniqueness is preserved and enjoyed by future generations.

    Angelia Dahniar (064_08.40)

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  26. Alfiah Sofiana D
    017/ 3A TBI
    a) All things must have a positive side as well as a negative side, as well as tiktok.
    b) The positive side of using TikTok is that we are free to express ourselves by showing our talents and interests, and have a video feature that is quite short.
    c) But there is also a negative side. The negative side of using this platform is that it has an impact on the mental health of teenagers. The endless scrolling mode makes it difficult for them to manage their time. This can damage sleep patterns which can reduce physical health. Another negative side is that it increases the risk of social media addiction. TikTok users watch endless videos for hours which causes them to ignore their responsibilities. The negative sides of tiktok include social media addiction, lowering mental and physical health, difficulty managing time.
    d) Therefore, it is important for TikTok users to limit their use and focus on positive and inspiring content to maintain their mental health.

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  27. Eva Rismawati
    035/3A TBI

    (a) The impact of TikTok Shop on offline sellers.
    (b) The presence of TikTok Shop has indeed brought about a significant shift in consumer behavior, which, in turn, has had a notable impact on offline sellers.
    (c) One primary consequence is the decreasing number of customers visiting physical stores. As more consumers opt for the convenience of online shopping through platforms like TikTok Shop, offline sellers are experiencing a decline in foot traffic. This shift is primarily driven by factors such as payment and delivery flexibility, which online platforms can offer.
    (d) In light of these changes, the existence of TikTok Shop poses a considerable challenge for offline sellers, forcing them to adapt to evolving consumer preferences and compete in an increasingly digital marketplace.

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  28. Name : Eryska Listiyaningtyas
    Student number : 23030220031
    Class : 3A
    12.30


    a. The Role of Gadgets in the Decline of Reading Interest
    b. Tiktok is a platform that provides short and entertaining videos that can easily attract young people's attention.
    c. However, based on the search results, there are some studies that show that TikTok has a negative impact on young people's interest in reading, such as young children's speaking ability that can affect their reading ability. Another study found that TikTok use has a negative effect on learning motivation among middle school students. In addition, social media, including TikTok, can lead to addiction and dependence, which can reduce time spent on reading.
    d. While there is no direct evidence that TikTok reduces young people's interest in reading, there is some research to suggest that the use of TikTok and social media in general can negatively affect learning motivation and can lead to addiction and dependence, which can reduce time spent reading. It is important for parents and educators to monitor social media use and encourage young people to engage in activities that promote reading and learning.


    Reference:
    https://repository.uinjkt.ac.id/dspace/bitstream/123456789/64424/1/11180184000055_Putri%20Rizki%20Amalia%20%28PT%29.pdf

    https://kalsel.kemenag.go.id/files/file/artikelprakom/15162891659956.pdf

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  30. (a)kuda Lumping is very Popular

    (b) Many people like this art because it is very interesting. (c) The amazed audience is certainly invited by this combination of the real world and the supernatural, because various attractions in the Kuda Lumping are carried out even though they seem to be beyond conscious human ability. Usually, the Kuda Lumping tradition appears at various public and special events, such as holiday celebrations, wedding parties, and other moments. According to pelajarindo, if the dancers start showing the attractions of eating glass, eating hot coals, jumping into burning coals, and even walking on over broken glass, that's when a phase with supernatural powers appears. What's more unique is that they will dance in a trance.
    Kuda Lumping displays many attractions that attract many spectators. Beautiful dances and the team's solidarity make Kuda Lumping a crowd of spectators. In this art there are values and teaching about historical events in ancient times. Kuda Lumping is served with beautiful gamelan accompaniment, making this art very entertaining for the public.
    In Java, especially, there are still many young people who are aware of the importance of preserving this culture, many young people are taking part in preserving this culture.
    (d) In conclusion, Kuda Lumping is very popular because it's so beautiful and unique. And the audience will get amazed when they see it.

    (Ema Widia Ningrum _054_08.40)

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  31. Name : Zahrani Karin Rizkiya Amanta
    NIM : 23030220013
    Class : TBI-3A
    12:30-14:10

    "Bullying remains a pervasive and concerning issue in schools and communities, affecting the well-being of countless individuals."

    Bullying can have a significant impact on the educational and professional growth of victims. Victims of bullying may resort to absenteeism from school or work, which can affect their overall performance and well-being. In addition, bullying can lead to long-lasting emotional scars, such as anxiety and depression, which can affect the mental health of victims. Furthermore, bullying can escalate to physical violence, which not only harms the victims but also poses safety risks in schools and communities. To prevent bullying, educators can foster a sense of community in their classrooms, which can lower bullying incidents and facilitate healing for targeted students. Educators can also develop, post, and discuss rules and sanctions related to bullying, form a group to coordinate anti-bullying efforts, and educate all staff, students, and parents about bullying. Parents should contact school staff each time their child informs them that he or she has been bullied, and federal laws can apply when the bullying is based on the child's disability. By teaching and instructing people and kids about bullying, we can show people who may be a bully how truly rude they are acting, and that someone who is a victim of bullying may learn a way to prevent it and stand up.

    Citations:
    [1] https://www.cityofroseville.com/AgendaCenter/ViewFile/Item/3996?fileID=29708
    [2] https://www.pacer.org/bullying/info/students-with-disabilities/
    [3] https://lesley.edu/article/6-ways-educators-can-prevent-bullying-in-schools
    [4] https://www.pacer.org/bullying/info/stats.asp
    [5] https://educateiowa.gov/pk-12/learner-supports/bullying-and-harassment
    [6] https://www.stopbullying.gov/bullying/special-needs

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  32. Name: Jaisya Rahma Maula
    Class: 3A
    NIM:23030220023
    12.45
    Theme: technologi
    Main idea: The good influence of social media on local culture
    Topic sentences:The good influence of social media on local culture in the digital era

    Supporting sentences:
    The good influence of social media on local culture can be seen in the way it helps local communities communicate and share traditions through platforms like Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. Many local communities now have their own social media pages to promote their culture and encourage community participation. The main reason behind this positive influence is that social media allows local cultures to stay relevant and grow in the digital era while still preserving their identity.

    Concluding sentences:
    The positive influence of social media on local culture illustrates how technology can enrich and preserve cultural heritage. In this digital era, social media has become an important tool for developing local culture globally, connecting different generations, and promoting cultural diversity.

    Reference
    "Pengaruh Positif dan Negatif Media Sosial Terhadap Masyarakat" https://www.djkn.kemenkeu.go.id/kpknl-semarang/baca-artikel/14366/Pengaruh-Positif-dan-Negatif-Media-Sosial-Terhadap-Masyarakat.html

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  33. A. Forest fire prevention and containment efforts
    B. Prevention and countermeasures should be taken seriously to reduce the risk of the disaster.
    C. First, regular increased patrols in forest fires can help detect the early possible point of fire and prevent its spread. Second, the use of modern technology such as satellite monitoring and early-warning systems can provide accurate and speedy information about the potential for forest fires, enabling more effective treatment.Third, community outreach campaigns on the dangers of forest fires and the importance of keeping clean and sustainability need to be ongoing in order to build a collective awareness of the importance of conservation of the environment.
    D. In conclusion, with cooperation between governments, communities, and other relevant parties, it is hoped that the prevention and management efforts of forest fires can be more effective and successful in preserving the wildlife for future generations.

    Khofifatul Auliyah_0057_08.40

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  34. (a) The influence of social media on teenagers on culture.

    (b) Social media has a significant influence on teenagers and its impact on culture. (c) Social media allows teenagers to connect with various cultures and trends from around the world, which can broaden their horizons about other cultures. However, often social media also reinforces certain trends or social norms, which can change cultural values and norms in the youth community. (d) In this context, it is important for us to understand that social media has a dual role in its influence on youth culture, opening the door to a broader understanding of cultural diversity while also raising questions about how this influence can shape the culture of the wider youth community in the future.

    (Devi Silvia_058_08.40)

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  35. Name: Muhammad Abid Al-Ghiffari
    NIM: 23030220053

    The dangers of bullying are evident in its capacity to inflict physical and emotional harm on its victims, resulting in long-lasting mental health issues, social isolation, and adverse effects on academic performance. Moreover, the emergence of cyberbullying in the digital age adds another dimension to this threat. In parallel, the decrease in morality, which may contribute to bullying behavior, is a complex issue influenced by various factors.

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  36. A. Nowadays, children don't get enough love from their parents, so they become victims of bullying.
    B. Bullying is aggressive behavior or harassment that is carried out repeatedly against someone, with the aim of hurting, degrading or intimidating the victim. This can take many forms, including physical, verbal, social, or cyberbullying. Bullying is a serious problem that can have serious psychological and emotional impacts on victims.
    C. Research has shown that a lack of emotional support and nurturing from parents can leave children more vulnerable to the negative effects of bullying, as they may seek validation and acceptance from their peers, making them potential targets for bullies.
    Studies have indicated a correlation between a lack of parental attention and nurturing and a higher likelihood of children experiencing social and emotional difficulties, which can contribute to their susceptibility to bullying.
    D. the importance of nurturing a loving and supportive environment at home, as well as fostering open communication to help children build resilience against bullying. Additionally, addressing the root causes of bullying in schools and communities is crucial for creating a safer and more empathetic society for children.
    https://www.siloamhospitals.com/informasi-siloam/artikel/apa-itu-bullying
    https://umsu.ac.id/berita/bullying-bentuk-dan-dampaknya/
    Qothrunada Fajar Anisa
    23030220026
    TBI 3A

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  37. Name: Aninda Esadilla Saputri
    NIM :23030220010
    Grade : 3A-TBI
    12.30

    A.There is no denying that sports has tremendous benefits for our health. By engaging in regular sports activities, we can improve our physical fitness levels. Our bodies become stronger and fitter, and this provides not only short-term, but also long-term benefits. In addition, sport also has a positive impact on our immune system. When we sports, our bodies become more resistant to infections and diseases, making us healthier overall. Not only that, sports also helps reduce the risk of heart disease, which is a deadly disease that is often linked to a sedentary lifestyle. Therefore, Sporting is one of the best ways to keep our heart healthy.
    B.In addition to its physical benefits, sport also has a positive impact on our emotional well-being. Physical activity can help reduce the stress that we often face in our daily lives. When we sport, our bodies release endorphins, natural chemicals that can make us feel happier and more relaxed. This is why many people feel better after sports. It also helps in overcoming emotional well-being issues such as depression and anxiety. In conclusion, engaging in regular physical activity is an important step towards achieving a healthier and happier lifestyle. Therefore, there is no reason not to integrate sport into our daily routine.
    C. It is important to remember that sport is not just about achieving an ideal physical shape, but also about a better quality of life overall. When we sport, we feel the added energy and feeling of freshness that allows us to be more productive in our daily activities. In addition, sport can be a hobby that brings happiness and boosts self-confidence. When we participate in sporting activities that we enjoy, it can bring us together with a community of people with similar interests, creating strong social bonds. Therefore, sport is not just about maintaining a healthy body, but also about creating a more meaningful and fulfilling life.

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  38. Name: Jendra Syuja Lukmana
    SRN: 23030220028
    Class: 3A-TBI (12.30-14.10)

    (A) The Impact of Microtransactions on Gamers and Their Spending Habits. (B) Gamers who are addicted to online games may end up wasting money on microtransactions, which are criticized by some journalists as being excessively greedy monetization methods used by game developers. Microtransactions are financial transactions made electronically while playing a game, and they allow gamers to purchase additional items, bonuses, or services inside the game. (C) According to a survey, almost 90% of people who play an MMO have spent money on it in-game, and most of them think that they needed to spend in order to remain competitive. However, spending in the game was strongly associated with Internet gaming disorder (IGD), and some studies have found a relationship between higher amounts of money spent on free-to-play games and IGD. (D) Professionals believe that microtransactions might negatively affect the child’s spending habits and lead them into debt. Purchases tend to be for small amounts, making it easy to spend impulsively. Therefore, it is important to be aware of the potential risks of microtransactions and to set limits on in-game spending to avoid financial harm.

    Source: https://www.lawgicstratum.com/post/effects-of-online-gaming-on-financial-and-mental-health

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  39. A ) Ondel-ondel is a form of Betawi performing arts that is often performed at people's parties. ( B ) Ondel-ondel is a form of Betawi performing arts.
    Ondel-ondel is a form of Betawi performing arts that is often performed at people's parties. Ondel-ondel is a large puppet figure that is believed to have supernatural powers. Due to the size of ondel-ondel puppets, they must be constructed in such a way that they can be easily carried by one person. Woven bamboo is used to build the ondel-ondel's hollow shell, the faces are lovingly carved from wood, and the hair is gently prepared from dried palm tree leaves. The bamboo structure that makes up their bulk is carefully clothed in bright garments, often those specific to the Betawi tradition. Ondel-ondel is an important part of Betawi culture and is a popular form of entertainment at social gatherings. Overall, ondel-ondel is an icon of Jakarta and is utilized for livening up festivals or for welcoming guests of honor, usually in pairs. Ondel-ondel is one of a few Indonesian folk performances that has survived modernization and is still being regularly performed.
    ( C ) Supporting sentences:
    - It is often performed at people's parties.

    - Ondel-ondel is a large puppet figure that is believed to have supernatural powers.
    ( D ) Concluding sentence:
    Overall, Ondel-ondel is an important part of Betawi culture and is a popular form of entertainment at social gatherings.

    ( Ardhian Tegar M _23030220062_ TBI 3B)

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  40. Pornography is a controversial topic that has been debated for years. One main idea is that pornography can be a social problem in the modern world. The proliferation of pornography in today's society has been fueled by the changing opinions on sex and the rapid technological advancements that have made it easy for people to access pornographic material. Research has shown that exposure to pornography can lead to addiction, desensitization, and distorted views of sex and relationships. Additionally, it can contribute to the objectification and exploitation of women. Studies have found that individuals who consume pornography are more likely to engage in risky sexual behaviors and have negative attitudes towards women. Pornography is seen as a condition to various social problems. Addicts are antisocial beings that have an unusually low opinion about women and are ready readily to accept explanations that tend to justify sexual crimes like rape, sodomy, etc. The media that exposes us to pornography should be checked, and parents should not shy away from discussing this content with their children. The government should use the machinery available to them to check on the production and distribution of pornographic content. In conclusion, while pornography may be viewed by some as harmless entertainment, it is important to recognize the potential negative effects it can have on individuals and society.


    ( Muhammad Fatihurrizal_001_12.30)

    Citations:
    https://fightthenewdrug.org/10-reasons-why-porn-is-unhealthy-for-consumers-and-society/
    https://cardinalnewmansociety.org/effects-pornography-individuals-marriage-family-community/

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  42. (a) Microtransactions have become a significant revenue source for game developers. (b) The impact of microtransactions on the gaming industry is complex and multifaceted.
    (c) Some players view microtransactions as a way for game developers to generate revenue, while others see them as greedy and a way to push players into accepting these mechanisms. A survey conducted by NPD found that 77% of players think microtransactions help extend the enjoyment they get from games. On the other hand, some players believe that microtransactions can create addictive behaviors among players and put significant financial burdens on vulnerable individuals. Moreover, players who use microtransactions are perceived as having a lower skill and status.
    (d) The impact of microtransactions on player experience is a controversial topic, and opinions on microtransactions are diverse and often depend on factors such as age, gaming habits, and personal values. Therefore, it is essential for game developers to understand and meet players' perceived values to incorporate microtransactions more effectively and avoid concerns.

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    https://www.gamedeveloper.com/business/survey-77-of-players-think-microtransactions-can-be-a-good-thing

    (M. Enggar G. P._024_12:30)

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  43. (a) Islamic dakwah on social media

    (b) Dakwah in Islam is the act of conveying the message of Allah to others. (c) Frist, There are various ways to perform dakwah, and social media has become a popular platform for it. (d) In a study conducted by Al-Deen and Hendricks (2018), they found that social media can be an effective tool for dakwah as it allows for a wider reach and engagement with the audience. They also emphasized the importance of using a humanistic approach in dakwah, which involves empathy, respect, and understanding towards the audience. Another study by Al-Attas and Al-Maghrabi (2019) highlights the role of social media influencers in dakwah. They found that influencers who use their platforms to promote Islamic values and teachings can have a significant impact on their followers. (e) Both studies emphasize the importance of humanizing dakwah and using a compassionate approach towards the audience. By doing so, we can effectively convey the message of Islam and inspire positive change in society.

    (Zidane ahmad_008_08.40)

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  44. (a) The popularity of Tiktok Shop reflects a broader digital trend, with e-commerce on the rise. (b) It's not just about shopping, but it's also a shift toward digital marketing and influencer-driven sales. Users don't just buy, but they actively promote products. (c) This shift means businesses must adapt and find new ways to connect with their audience. They use social media and Tiktok Shop to collaborate with influencers. (d) In today's fast-paced digital world, staying visible on platforms like Tiktok Shop is essential for businesses to meet the changing desires of modern consumers.

    Irma Mafatihul Husna/037/3A/12.30


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  45. Love's power as a support system, especially within the embrace of family's love, can provide individuals with the psychological strength needed to overcome obstacles and ultimately lead them to the path of success. When facing challenges, the knowledge that one is loved and supported by their family acts as a source of motivation. This encouragement can drive individuals to persevere, even when the going gets tough. Moreover, the emotional stability nurtured by family love helps individuals maintain a positive outlook, making it easier to tackle life's hurdles with resilience.
    In sum, the power of love, especially when it comes from family, is a potent force that bolsters individuals with the strength, motivation, and emotional stability needed to overcome adversity and embark on a journey towards success.
    (Dhea_006_08?40)

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  46. (a) Negative impact of excessive video gaming besides social isolation.
    (b) Excessive video gaming doesn't just lead to social isolation but also affects your thoughts and emotions. (c) It can harm your academic or work performance because you might prioritize gaming over your responsibilities. Furthermore, spending an excessive amount of time in the virtual world of gaming can make you less sensitive to real-life emotions and situations, making it difficult to empathize and build meaningful connections with others. Additionally, the prolonged screen time and sedentary lifestyle often associated with excessive gaming can lead to physical health issues, worsening the feeling of loneliness (Ghuman & Griffiths, 2012). (d) To counter the detrimental consequences of excessive video gaming, it is important to find ways to integrate your gaming hobby with your responsibilities and social activities in the real world. This approach not only allows you to enjoy gaming but also minimizes its negative consequences, ensuring a fulfilling and wholesome life

    (Kevin A.M_039_12:30)

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  47. Nama: Winda Lita Sari
    NIM: 23030220007

    *Paragraph*
    Love is the key to success, especially when it comes from family. Love has the power to inspire someone by providing deep motivation to achieve goals, bringing feelings of happiness, and encouraging them to do good to others. Love is often associated with unity and understanding among individuals with differences because it has the ability to transcend differences, facilitate communication, and create strong emotional bonds that connect people despite their distinctions. For example, love can be a source of inspiration for families in creating happiness that touches their hearts through loving relationships, support, and closeness among family members. Success, motivation, differences, effective communication, and emotional inspiration are all intertwined with affectionate support and closeness, forming the foundation.
    Success, motivation, differences, effective communication, and emotional inspiration are all intimately interwoven with the support and closeness that characterize loving relationships. The dynamics of familial affection can bring forth unparalleled motivation, propelling individuals toward their objectives. Love's unifying force allows for effective communication, enabling people to bridge the gaps that separate them. Its emotional influence inspires acts of kindness and generosity, creating a chain reaction of positivity. Ultimately, the success that stems from love is a testament to the meaningful and fulfilling human relationships that thrive on the foundations of affectionate support and the bonds of closeness.

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  48. Theme:Self-development
    (a)Commitment to becoming an ideal student academic.(b)Commitment is the cornerstone of becoming an ideal student academic, driving motivation and persistence.(c) (1) Commitment to academic excellence often involves setting clear goals and prioritizing studies over distractions.
    (2) An ideal student academic also actively seeks help and resources when faced with challenges, demonstrating a commitment to their educational growth. (d)In conclusion, a strong commitment to academic success, including goal setting and seeking support when needed, paves the way for students to become ideal academic scholars.
    In summary, the path to becoming an ideal student academic is not only marked by commitment but also by the proactive pursuit of resources and assistance, ensuring a well-rounded development in their academic journey.

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  49. (A) In gaming community, toxic behavior manifest in various ways.(B) As we know, toxic behavior is the most dangerous issue in gaming scene.
    (C) It start when some player that called toxic gamer start started blaming other players who weren't good enough to play the game.A toxic gamer is a player who has a bad attitude in an online gaming context. These players are players who are constantly complaining, swearing, being rude, acting out towards other payers, and bringing other players down.
    (D) The impact of toxic gamer is Interest in a game will decrease because beginners will be blamed by toxic gamers and causes toxic behavior to continue.

    Reference:
    https://getkidas.com/what-is-a-toxic-gamer/

    (Dwi Adhi Pamungkas _021_12:30)

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  50. (a) Continuing with the benefits of using Google Scholar, (b) another equally important feature is its collaborative capabilities. (c) This allows users to share articles and research with fellow academics, making it a powerful tool for cooperation. (d) Furthermore, it facilitates the publication and sharing of research with the scholarly community.

    (Auliya Roudlotus Tsani_0034_12.30)

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  53. Name: Shafira Az Zahra Buditia
    Nim: 23030220038/3A - TBI


    Lately the latest online game Mobile Legend Bang Bang (MLBB) has caused lots of dangerous addiction from old to young people. What is Mobile Legends Bang Bang actually? MLBB is a moba games that supported both in ios and android. It has lots of similarity like League of legends and DOTA in PC, and it also has lots of interesting features that can be played both for young to old generations. But does everybody know that this game has caused lots of dangerous impact on our daily lives? As a students lots of people starts to forget their obligation to study or doing their assignment in order to play that game. They also has lots of toxic players and non healthy fandom that's bad for underage minutes. What can we do to stop them? Both MLBB and play Store or Apple Store should starts to sort this gave as a 17y.o games only and they should give a severe punishment for players who's toxic and bad so that they will not make everything worse. Therefore, we need to limit and manage our time for studying and playing games so that we won't have an addiction that will effect our daily lives.

    Unfortunately, this dangerous addiction cannot be stopped without having a good self control. Have you ever seen a case where a kid steals or indebted to some lean shark without their parents noticing? In May 2021, a 15 year old boy was captured and punished for stealing and burning a neighbor house. The reason was merely because he didn't find some money to steal in order to top up some games. He was pissed off and finally decided to set his neighbour's house on fire. The neighbour was mad and they're dissapointed with him, not to mention how many times he have stolen money and things from everyone, he even have stolen charity money from mosque. That's why having a good self control is very important so that we won't do anything that can harm or inflicted everyone around us

    Reference:
    https://youtu.be/dpxDdSS5i0A?si=o2O9NKnXKhDe-JxZ

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  54. Main idea : Bullying is a pervasive social issue that can have profound and lasting effects on individuals, particularly in the context of schools and online environments.
    Supporting sentences: It involves repeated aggressive behavior, often driven by a power imbalance, and can manifest in various forms such as verbal, physical, or cyberbullying. The consequences of bullying are wide-ranging, impacting the mental and emotional well-being of victims, leading to low self-esteem, anxiety, and even depression.
    Concluding sentence : Education and open communication play pivotal roles in addressing this issue and fostering empathy and kindness among individuals.
    Name : Qonita Nur Aeni Rahayu (23030320002) 3ATBI (12.30)

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  55. 1.Ondel-ondel is usually accompanied by unique music and dance.
    A.main idea:Ondel-ondel is a Betawi folk performance that has survived modernization and is still being regularly performed. traditional performance of Ondel-ondel, a form of folk performance using large puppets that originated from Betawi, Indonesia, and is often performed in festivals. The performance is usually accompanied by unique music and dance, and the puppets are dressed in brightly colored garments, and in some occasions, in traditional Betawi clothing.
    B.•suporting sentence:provide details about the performance, its musical accompaniment, and its cultural significance.
    •The shows comprise a pair of male and female puppets, which the performers wear, who dance to traditional music."
    C.concluding sentence:cultural preservation is necessary to keep traditional performances like Ondel-ondel alive.

    WISNU KUSUMA JATIJATI
    23030220078
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  56. (A) It is clear that effective time management plays an important role in healthy living. (B) One of the keys is the ability to set clear priorities and allocate time appropriately. (C) Research by Vorderer and Klimmt (2009) highlights the importance of prioritizing daily responsibilities alongside free time activities such as gaming to maintain life balance. In addition, research by Turel et al. (2018) emphasized that individuals who manage their time effectively tend to complete their tasks efficiently, thereby increasing their overall productivity. (D) In short, as highlighted by various researchers, managing time effectively, and maintaining a balance between gaming and important activities is essential for personal development and a good life.

    Reference: https://media.neliti.com/media/publications/167302-ID-time-management-menggunakan-waktu-secara.pdf

    (M.Fatakhurrozzaaq_025_12.30)

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  57. Name : Rizqi Adi Pratama
    NIM : 23030220044
    Class : TBI 3B
    (a)Role from the parents is important to create moral for their child. (b)The role of parents is undeniably crucial in the formation of a morally upright child. (c) As the primary influencers in a child's life, parents' actions, values, and guidance play a pivotal role in molding the child's character. They act as the first teachers, introducing their children to the concepts of right and wrong. Through modeling behavior, they provide tangible examples of how to navigate moral choices. Effective communication between parents and children helps in the understanding of the reasons behind moral decisions, facilitating the internalization of moral principles. Moreover, parents set consistent boundaries and offer guidance, allowing children to grasp the importance of responsibility and accountability. This, in turn, shapes the child's understanding of the consequences of their actions. In essence, parents are instrumental in instilling values like respect, empathy, and kindness, which are fundamental in creating a morally conscious individual. The impact of parental guidance on moral development extends beyond childhood, as the moral foundation laid during these formative years can significantly influence a person's character and ethical choices throughout their life. (d)Therefore, the role of parents in fostering a moral child is indispensable and leaves a lasting impression on the child's journey towards becoming a morally responsible and upright individual.

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  58. The impact of Tiktok Shop closure for online sellers

    The closure of TikTok Shop will have a significant impact on online sellers who use the platform to sell. They may experience a decrease in revenue, loss of marketing channels, and difficulty in maintaining relationships with customers who may switch to other platforms or online stores to buy the products they previously purchased on TikTok Shop. Therefore, online sellers who rely on TikTok Shop as one of their main sources of income will feel the impact after this closure.

    Adinda Nisaa Tiyarningarum _ 029 _ 12.30

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  59. a) Other impacts of rainstorms on residents

    b) Besides small traders, the rainstorm also affected workers.c) According to the World Health Organization, 2010. Global recommendations on physical activity for health, maintaining the health of workers is very important during the rainy season, especially with the recent rainstorms. Rainstorms also greatly affect workers who work outdoors, for example builders, where they cannot continue their work when it rains, besides that materials such as sand will be carried away by rain currents which cause losses. Many other jobs are also affected if a rainstorm occurs that will cause the income of outdoor workers to decrease. d) In addition to small traders, the impact of rainstorms on residents extends to workers, leading to reduced income and operational disruptions, making it crucial to prioritize worker health during the rainy season. ( Ana Indriyani_009_12:30)

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  60. a). The school's role in preventing bullying

    b) schools have an important role in preventing bullying among students. c) To prevent and address bullying, schools can establish a specialized anti-bullying team.
    This team plays an important role in supporting victims, investigating bullying incidents and taking appropriate action against the perpetrators.
    In addition, schools can work closely with parents. Schools should communicate with them about their role in preventing bullying and support consistent efforts at home and at school. d) Therefore, through a comprehensive approach that includes establishing anti-bullying teams and encouraging close collaboration with parents, schools can contribute significantly to creating a safe and secure environment.

    Alfina Eka Ri'ayatul _23030220018_3A/TBI

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  61. Nama : Riska Vitriana
    Nim: 23030220049

    (a) Greenhouse gas emissions from fires can affect the climate and welfare of local communities.
    (b) the greenhouse effect changes weather patterns and disrupts the natural balance.
    (c) the greenhouse effect can pose many risks to humans and all other living things on Earth.
    Excessive greenhouses will cause global warming where the temperature on earth will rise significantly, which is characterized by things including melting of polar ice, damage to ecosystem effects, rising sea levels and quite extreme climate change.
    (d) The greenhouse effect can cause many losses, one of which is the destruction of ecosystem impacts, melting polar ice caps, rising seas and extreme climate change.

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  62. (A)Ondel-ondel, with its imposing mask and towering figure, (B)undoubtedly has the potential to evoke fear and discomfort in young children who are unfamiliar with its cultural significance. (C)The striking appearance of this traditional puppet, deeply rooted in Betawi culture, can be overwhelming for some, especially those who lack the context to understand its meaning. While Ondel-ondel holds great value in preserving and celebrating cultural heritage, it is essential for us to recognize the importance of cultural education and awareness. (D)These efforts can help children and individuals of all ages appreciate and embrace the rich traditions of their heritage without fear, fostering a sense of unity and pride in their cultural identity.

    Chintya Zahrawatul Ulya Handoyo (23030220050)

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  63. (a) For the future, Artificial Intelligence will be dangerous for human occupation.
    (b) Other than it is positive impact that bring convenience in working, AI has brought the negative impact that can affect our daily lives as well. (c) Firstly, the increasing number of unemployment was because many things can be done by AI more quickly and efficiently in the process. If you do not improve your abilities, especially doing things that AI cannot do, it will be difficult to find a job in the future. In the future, the level of job competition is getting tighter which competes with technology. The World Economic Forum estimates that AI technology will create 97 million new jobs by 2025 that are specifically related to AI. It is even estimated that as many as 85 million jobs will be lost due to automation that will occur from 2020 to 2025. Secondly, it is about privacy violations. This can happen if there are people who use data obtained from AI to hack into bank servers or in other words steal data for personal gain. This is certainly very detrimental to the person who owns the data and it can cause a wide impact on individuals and related companies. So it is important to ensure data security and implement strict security protocols when using AI technology to protect the privacy and security of information.
    (d) In conclusion, AI has negative impacts that can be caused but can be handled by improving its capabilities and also ensuring data security when using it.

    References:
    https://technevy.com/2023/04/21/the-positive-and-negative-impact-of-ai-in-our-lives/
    https://www.inilah.com/bahaya-ai-bagi-manusia-di-masa-depan

    (Syafira Damayanti Puspa Nugraha_0005_12.30)

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  65. (a) Generation Z is Driven and Motivation

    (b) Generation Z is immensely more driven to make change and be superior to their elders. (c) Generation Z is often characterized as a Driven and Motivated generation. They are known for their ambition, desire for change, and willingness to take action on important issues. Many Gen Z individuals are proactive in pursuing their goals, whether in education, career, or social change, and are often unafraid to challenge the status quo. Their drive and determination make them a force to be reckoned with in various aspects of society. (d) Generation Z's Driven and Motivation are not only a defining feature of their generation but also a force for positive change in various domains of society. They are passionate, forward-thinking, and unafraid to challenge the norms, making them a generation to watch as they continue to shape the world around them.

    ( Yasmine Kamila Arifin_045_08.40 )

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  66. Supporting sentence:
    1. The large number of users who abuse social media with pornographic displays has resulted in many early marriages with around 6/10 of Indonesian women.
    2. Early marriage results in many sudden deaths due to the lack of strength of the young mother, and the most severe consequence is the large number of children with special needs due to lack of adequate nutrition.
    The younger generation continues to experience decline
    interest in school because of the bad impact of social media.

    a.) This does not escape the rise of pornography which has spread to an early age.
    b.) In fact, there are many negative impacts arising from this problem, such as: decreased interest in school, poor morale of young people and c.) even sexually transmitted diseases have become the government's focus which must be addressed immediately.

    Concluding : Pornography is one of the bad impacts of social media which results in many early marriages. The worst impact is the destruction of the nation's young generation in the modern era like today.

    Reference:
    https://dinkes.jogjaprov.go.id/berita/detail/dampak-kecanduan-pornografi-pornografi-bisa-merusak-otak#

    Meisa Kamalvi_012_12.30

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  68. (a) as educates people, we should be write to filter some information from various network.
    (b) critical thinking skills are essential for filtering information from various networks and enhancing education and society
    (c) furthermore, critical thinking skills play a crucial role in this process, enabling individuals to discern reliable sources from misinformation.
    moreover, these skills don’t just benefit individuals. They contribute to a more informed and discerning society, driving intellectual growth and fostering active citizenship. In a world where misinformation can spread rapidly, the ability to critically analyze information is more important than ever.
    (d) In conclusion, critical thinking skills are not just tools for individual empowerment. They are the building blocks of a discerning society and a cornerstone of global enlightenment. As we continue to educate ourselves and others, let’s remember the importance of these skills in shaping our digital world.
    references:
    https://www.cambridge.org/core/books/abs/critical-thinking/references/F1071D7EF9DAC48E140002798D22DD34
    https://www.rand.org/content/dam/rand/pubs/conf_proceedings/CF300/CF369/RAND_CF369.pdf
    Malika Dwi Puspita/3a/003

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  70. (a) The recovery from the trauma of bullying.
    (b) Recovery from bullying can be a difficult and ongoing process that requires support from family, friends, and professionals.
    (c) Family and friends can also play an important role in the recovery process by providing emotional support and creating a safe and loving environment for the individual. They can offer a listening ear, provide encouragement, and act as a source of comfort and encouragement. Professionals, such as counselors, psychologists, and social workers, can also provide a range of services to help the individual in their recovery process. They can offer therapy, support groups, and other interventions to help the individual cope with the trauma and promote healing.
    (d) In conclusion, recovery from bullying requires a combination of support from family, friends, and professionals.

    Rukma Amala S_077_08.40

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  71. (A). Why moral decrease can be affect by their parents
    (B). main idea:
    parents play a crucial role in shaping their children's moral development. Parents' sense of empathy, justice, and fairness can influence early moral development in their children.
    (C). supporting sentence:
    A study from the University of Chicago suggests that parents’ sensitivity to both other people’s feelings and to injustice may influence early moral development in their children.
    Children's moral development was best predicted by a parental discussion style that involved Socratic questioning and supportive interactions, combined with empathy and warmth
    (D). concluding sentence:
    In conclusion, parents play a crucial role in shaping the moral values of their children. A decrease in moral values can be attributed to the lack of guidance and positive role models from parents. Therefore, it is important for parents to actively engage with their children and instill positive values and behaviors in them from a young age. This can help to ensure that children grow up to be responsible and ethical members of society.

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  72. a.) The proses of calamity in dry season.
    b.)The process of calamity begins with a reduction in the amount of rainfall below normal in a season. c.)The low amount of rainfall will cause a reduction in groundwater reserves that are important in people's lives. If it occurs for a long period of time, the conditions in the area will occur such as the decline in water levels such as rivers, to the reduction of water reserves for plants that cause many crop failures, and even have the potential to cause fires in the area.
    d.)Therefore, saving water in the dry season is very necessary so that the disaster does not get worse.

    Refences : https://news.detik.com/berita/d-6762353/kekeringan-pengertian-jenis-jenis-penyebab-dan-dampaknya

    Eka Aprilia Cahyani_0011_12.30

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  73. (a)Self-development is a key factor in achieving academic success for students.
    (b)Effective management of study time is one of the most critical skills for academic success. (c)Time management skills are essential because they help ensure students stay on top of all their readings, projects, and exams. Managing time well also requires students to stay organized, prioritize tasks, and plan out a daily, weekly, and monthly study schedule that they stick to. (d)Therefore, working on time management skills is crucial for students to achieve academic success.

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  74. a) Islamic content is now easy to find on all social media. b) Social media is one of the places to share any knowledge, including content containing Islamic knowledge. One of the Islamic content creators is Husain Basyaiban. c) Husain Basyaiban utilizes the TikTok application as a medium for da'wah. The topics discussed are still relevant to the problems that often occur in everyday life by providing solutions to these problems. With its unique characteristics, many social media users are interested in watching its content, especially for Muslim teenagers. d) The conclusion is that easy internet access makes social media one of the places to share any knowledge, including Islamic knowledge as Husain Basyaiban has done by raising the topic of problems that often occur in everyday life. In addition, he will also provide solutions to these problems.

    Reference: https://www.google.com/amp/s/m.kumparan.com/amp/berita-hari-ini/profil-husain-basyaiban-kreator-tiktok-yang-terkenal-berkat-konten-dakwahnya-1zfrcovxt6M

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  75. Name : Zhafira Dionee Lalibah H
    NIM : 23030220047
    Class : 3B TBI

    (a)The true essence of love is a deeply emotional concept such as empathy and understanding.(b)That the true essence of love goes beyond words and emotions, and it is best understood and cultivated through the act of loving others. Love is not passive but an active choice that involves kindness, compassion, and sacrifice. Through these acts of love, we learn empathy, patience, and the power of connection, enriching our own lives and experiencing the true essence of love in various forms.(c) "Love transcends mere verbal expressions and fleeting feelings, as it finds its true depth and meaning in the selfless actions we take to care for and support others.". (d)In conclusion, love's essence is not confined to emotions alone, but rather, it is a force that comes alive through our active acts of empathy, compassion, and selflessness. By loving others, we not only deepen our own understanding of love but also enrich our lives by forging meaningful connections with those around us, embracing the profound beauty of love in its many forms.

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  76. Name : Nabila Soraya
    Nim : 23030220004
    Class : TBI - 3A

    a.Topic sentence :
    As educates people, we should be write to filter some information from various network.
    Sure, I can help you with that.
    b. Main Idea: It is important for educators to teach individuals how to critically evaluate and filter information from various sources in order to promote informed decision-making and prevent the spread of misinformation.
    c. Supporting Sentence: This skill equips individuals with the ability to discern reliable sources from unreliable ones, fostering a culture of skepticism and discernment in the age of information overload.
    d. Concluding Sentence: In doing so, we empower learners to be responsible consumers and sharers of information, contributing to a more informed and knowledge-driven society.
    references : https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ9118910.pdf

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  77. (a) how to deal with modern cultural influences

    (b) There are several ways that we are not affected by the negative impact of modern culture. (c) Such as, we can filter modern culture that enters Indonesia and must be adapted to values, norms, and beliefs. Then we should use and love domestic products so they are not forgotten. Last but not least, we as the younger generation must preserve the original culture of Indonesia and introduce it to the world. (d) So, modern culture is not always bad, it all depends on how we deal with it.
    (Kaila Putri Rahmatika_067_08.40)

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  78. Name : Arum Pebri Yani
    NIM:23030220014
    Class:3A-TBI

    (a)Topic Sentence:
    In the age of digital education, the ability to filter information from various networks is a vital skill for educated individuals.

    (b) main idea:
    the age of digital education, the ability to filter information from various networks is a crucial skill for educated individuals.

    (c)Supporting Sentences:
    With the vast amount of information available online, learning to discern reliable sources from unreliable ones is essential to make informed decisions and prevent the spread of misinformation. Developing information filtering skills not only protects us from falsehoods but also ensures that we can engage with knowledge that aligns with our values and beliefs, creating a more informed and conscious society.

    (d)Concluding Sentence:
    In conclusion, the capacity to filter information effectively is an integral aspect of education in the digital era, allowing us to distinguish fact from fiction, preserve our values, and contribute to a more enlightened and responsible community.

    references:
    https://www.ala.org/news/press-releases/2014/06/over-filtering-schools-and-libraries-harms-education-new-ala-report-finds
    https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/21582440231154474

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  79. (a) Establishment of laws for bullying perpetrators in school.

    (b) Establishing laws for bullying perpetrators in school can be an effective way to prevent bullying. (c) Firstly, these laws provide for identifying and addressing bullying incidents in educational institutions.This is intended to ensure that students and school staff are aware of the consequences of bullying. Secondly, these laws contain anti-bullying programs that offer preventive measures, such as awareness campaigns and counseling services to help create a safer school environment. (d) In conclusion, establishing laws for bullying perpetrators in school is an essential step in preventing bullying to create a positive learning environment for all students.

    Fatimatuz Zahra/ 022/ 3A/ 12.30

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  80. Name : Muhamad Ichsan Al fauzi
    NIM : 23030220032
    (a)Islamic contents that easy found in social media can give a big impact.
    (b)Recently our social media are booming with supporting Palestine.
    (c)It is also a good Islamic contents.The contents are contains how much suffering the Muslim of Palestinians endure from the oppression of Israel. Furthermore, it also justifies the mindset that helping Palestine doesn't mean promoting the end of days but, in fact, brings continuous rewards for everyone. In that content many people are show their support by words, statements, songs, donation and many others which they post on many platform in social media as a form of humanity.
    (d)So that Islamic contents In social media are the right way to develop the sense of humanity among us and justifies our mindset, especially fellow muslims.
    (Muhamad Ichsan Al fauzi _032_08.40)

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  81. Name : Dina listiyati
    Nim : 23030220020
    Class: TBI/3A

    A. Topic sentence: The impact of pornography addiction

    B. Main idea: Addiction to pornography is a condition in which an individual cannot resist anything related to pornography. Consequently, someone who becomes addicted to watching pornographic films may experience numerous negative consequences.

    C. Supporting sentences: Among these negative consequences, pornography can harm the brain, cause emotional disturbances, reduce social interactions, disrupt sexual activities, and even jeopardize one's future.

    D. Concluding sentence: Therefore, it is crucial for individuals to raise awareness of the risks of pornography addiction and seek help if they find themselves trapped in such a habit, so they can steer clear of potential negative impacts that may disrupt their lives.

    Refereces : https://www.detik.com/sumut/berita/d-6954908/kecanduan-pornografi-berdampak-buruk-bagi-kesehatan-bisa-jadi-begini

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  82. Name : Abdul Aziz S. Y.
    NIM : 23030220015
    Class : 3A / TBI

    Mistakes in using handphones can lead to various issues.(Main Idea) One common error is excessive screen time, which can result in eye strain and disrupted sleep patterns.(Supporting sentence )Another frequent mistake is not using headphones or reducing the volume, potentially causing hearing damage over time.(Supporting sentence )Being mindful of our mobile phone usage and taking steps to minimize these errors can help us enjoy the benefits of technology without harming our health.(Concluding sentence )

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  83. Name : Aldi Saputro
    NIM : 23030220030
    Class : TBI 3A

    *The use of technology must be in proportion.*

    Main Idea:
    The use of technology must be in proportion to ensure a balanced and sustainable future.

    Supporting Sentences:

    1. Excessive reliance on technology without considering its environmental and social impact can lead to unforeseen consequences.
    2. Striking a balance between technological advancement and responsible usage is essential for the well-being of individuals and the planet.

    Concluding Sentence:
    In conclusion, it is imperative that we carefully manage and moderate our use of technology to create a more harmonious and sustainable future.

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  84. Name : Afifah Khairun Nisa
    NIM : 23030220016
    Class : 3A/12.30

    (a) There are several things that need to be considered in using social media. (b) There are many impacts of using this application on social life and its users. (c) Besides having challenges with data security, TikTok also has an impact on the social lives of its users. This is indicated by the lack of socializing with other people because they are more interested in gadgets. TikTok users can easily spend hours on the app. Usually they watch endless videos and consequently neglect their responsibilities. (d) It can be concluded from these impacts that TikTok causes social media addiction which can affect mental health, physical and social life. So ways and efforts are needed to minimize this impact.

    References : https://an-nur.ac.id/tiktok-dan-dampaknya-terhadap-kesehatan-mental-penggunanya/

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  85. Name : Eryska Listiyaningtyas
    Student number : 23030220031
    Class : 3A


    a. Declining interest in reading among young people due to increased use of digital devices.
    b. Reading interest among young people is declining due to busy modern lifestyles and a plethora of digital entertainment options that make it easier for people to get distracted from reading.
    This is evident from the fact that teens today spend more time on digital media and less time reading books, magazines, or watching television.
    This decline in reading interest is significant, especially among high school students, who reported reading two fewer books per year in 2016 compared to 1976. In addition, about one-third of high school students did not read a book for pleasure in the past year, almost three times the number reported in the 1970s.
    c. Thus, the challenge of increasing interest in reading among young people requires a concerted effort, so that the tradition of reading is not eroded by technological advances and modern lifestyles that increasingly lead to digital entertainment.


    Reference: https://thesocialtalks.com/blog/the-decline-of-reading-in-the-social-media-age-causes-and-consequences/

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  86. The influence of social media on teenagers on culture. Social media has a significant influence on teenagers and its impact on culture.Social media allows teenagers to connect with various cultures and trends from around the world, which can broaden their horizons about other cultures. However, often social media also reinforces certain trends or social norms, which can change cultural values and norms in the youth community. In this context, it is important for us to understand that social media has a dual role in its influence on youth culture, opening the door to a broader understanding of cultural diversity while also raising questions about how this influence can shape the culture of the wider youth community in the future.

    1. What is the MAIN IDEA?
    The main idea is that social media's influence on teenagers significantly impacts culture, allowing them to connect with diverse cultures globally, broadening their perspectives. However, social media also reinforces trends or norms, potentially altering cultural values among youth, posing questions about its impact on the broader youth community's culture in the future.

    2. What are the supporting sentences?
    - "Social media allows teenagers to connect with various cultures and trends from around the world, which can broaden their horizons about other cultures."
    - "However, often social media also reinforces certain trends or social norms, which can change cultural values and norms in the youth community."

    3. Are the supporting sentences still LINKED TO the main idea?
    Yes, The supporting sentences provided ("Social media allows teenagers to connect with various cultures and trends from around the world, which can broaden their horizons about other cultures" and "However, often social media also reinforces certain trends or social norms, which can change cultural values and norms in the youth community") are directly linked to the main idea about the influence of social media on teenagers and culture. They help illustrate how social media's impact can both broaden cultural understanding and potentially alter cultural norms within the youth community, aligning with the main theme of social media's influence on culture and teenagers.

    4. What is the concluding sentence?
    "In this context, it is important for us to understand that social media has a dual role in its influence on youth culture, opening the door to a broader understanding of cultural diversity while also raising questions about how this influence can shape the culture of the wider youth community in the future."

    5. Is the concluding sentence still LINKED TO the main idea?
    Yes, the concluding sentence is intricately linked to the main idea. It ties back to the broader theme of social media's influence on teenagers and culture by emphasizing the dual role of social media in shaping youth culture: expanding cultural diversity awareness while also prompting reflection on how this influence might mold the broader youth community's culture in the future. It reaffirms the central idea while broadening the scope for further consideration.

    6. Please revise, if you think that the sentences does not match with the main idea!
    The concluding sentence effectively aligns with the main idea but can be revised for clarity and coherence:
    "In this context, it's crucial to recognize that social media's impact on youth culture operates in dual capacities. While it facilitates a broader comprehension of cultural diversity through global connectivity, it simultaneously prompts contemplation regarding how this influence might mold the future culture of the wider youth community."

    (Devi Silvia_23030220058)




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  87. Name: Shafira Az Zahra Buditia
    Class: 3A-TBI
    NIM: 23030220038

    Unfortunately, this dangerous addiction cannot be stopped without having a good self control. Have you ever seen a case where a kid steals or indebted to some lean shark without their parents noticing? In May 2021, a 15 year old boy was captured and punished for stealing and burning a neighbor house. The reason was merely because he didn't find some money to steal in order to top up some games. He was pissed off and finally decided to set his neighbour's house on fire. The neighbour was mad and they're dissapointed with him, not to mention how many times he have stolen money and things from everyone, he even have stolen charity money from mosque. That's why having a good self control is very important so that we won't do anything that can harm or inflicted everyone around us

    1. Is there any transition words there?
    Yes

    2. If yes please mention
    Unfortunately, not to mention, finally, that's why

    3. Is there any transitions used correctly in your paragraph
    Yes all of them have used correctly in a coherent paragraph

    4. Please revise your paragraph with correct transition if it's needed
    "Unfortunately, this dangerous addiction cannot be stopped without good self-control. Have you ever seen a case where a kid steals or becomes indebted to a loan shark without their parents noticing? In May 2021, a 15-year-old boy was captured and punished for stealing and burning a neighbor's house. The reason was merely because he couldn't find money to steal in order to top up some games. He was upset and finally decided to set his neighbor's house on fire. The neighbor was furious, and they're disappointed with him, not to mention how many times he has stolen money and things from everyone. He even stole charity money from the mosque. That's why having good self-control is essential so that we won't do anything that can harm or affect everyone around us."

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