Creating Main Idea

Please post your sketch or draft which you made last week with your group here (On Comment Box). However, you have to develop your individual main idea based on the topic discussed. Don't forget to write your last three digits of your Students' Number. 

Here is the example of mine:

Topic/Theme: CULTURE

Main ideas: 

1. Dangerous massive K-pop culture.

2….

3….

4….

5….

Topic sentences:

1. Today, massive K-pop culture in Indonesia becomes more dangerous for young generation.

2….

And so on.

Post your sketch or draft which you made with your group on the Blog (On Comment Box: 1 comment for 1 group). However, you have to develop your individual main idea based on the topic discussed. Don't forget to write your last three digits of your Students' Number. 

Names: MARISA_001,....,.....


Comments

  1. syafiraaOctober 1, 2023 at 5:48 AM

    Topic\Theme: Technology

    Main ideas:
    1. Dangerous Addiction to play mobile Legend Bang Bang As a Student.
    2. Benefit use of Google Scholar for students to find some journal articles.
    3. Mistakes in using handphones.
    4. The use of technology must be in proportion.
    5. Dangerous of Artificial Intelligence for the Future.

    Topic sentences:
    1. Lately, The latest online game Mobile Legends Bang Bang has caused lots of dangerous addiction from old to young people.
    2. Currently, Google Scholar is boardly used by number of people as a source of reference.
    3. Most people in Indonesia are not wise in using handphones, especially for teenagers.
    4. Nowadays, we have to be smart to use technology in order not to fall into the trap.
    5. For the future, Artificial Intelligence will be dangerous for human occupation.

    - Syafira Damayanti Puspa N (005)
    - Abdul Aziz Syahrani Yahya (015)
    - Aldi Saputro (030)
    - Auliya Roudlotus Tsani (034)
    - Shafira Az Zahra Buditia (038)

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  2. RizkiOctober 2, 2023 at 1:28 AM

    Theme: Phsycology

    Main Idea:
    1. Parents
    2. Moral
    3. Bullying
    4 Mental health

    Topic Sentence:
    1. Role from the parents its so important to create moral for their child.
    2. Down grade of moral its appeared because effect from parents, which one is bullying.
    3. Bullying is very dangerous, its can broke the mental health from the target of bullying.
    4. Don't playing with mental health, its sounds like unimportant but that effect its so big for the victim.

    Rizqi Adi Pratama (044)
    M. Abid Alghifari (053)
    Ikmal Attamal Khuluq (071)
    Malik Maulana Ibrohim (061)

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  3. Trista AyuOctober 2, 2023 at 5:20 AM

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  4. Trista AyuOctober 2, 2023 at 5:21 AM

    Theme : Education
    Main idea : Positive impact of mobile phone for educated people

    Topic sentence :
    - As educated people, we should be wise to filter some information from various network.
    - The integration of mobile phone in education is changing the dynamics of learning, offering new opportunities for personalited and interactive learning experiences.
    - Mobility, we can conduct research and read journals while on the go or when you are not in front of a computer

    Group :
    Malika Dwi Puspita (003)
    Nabila Soraya (004)
    Meisa Kamalvi (012)
    Arum Pebri Yani (014)
    Trista Ayu Farasya (027)

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  5. Anggi Galih ZamaniOctober 2, 2023 at 6:06 AM

    Tema Self-development

    Main idea
    1.Self-development in student academic.
    2. Trasisation from hight scholl students to students avademic.
    3. Commitment to becoming an ideal student academic.

    Topic Sentence
    1.Self-development is a key factor in achieving academic success for students.
    2. The transition from high school to academic life represents a significant shift in students' responsibilities and expectations.
    3. Commitment is the cornerstone of becoming an ideal student academic, driving motivation and persistence.

    TBI 3B
    1.Naufal (042)
    2. Arif (040)
    3.Anggi (036)

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  6. DevisilviaOctober 2, 2023 at 6:12 AM

    Tema Self-development

    Main idea
    1.Self-development in student academic.
    2. Trasisation from hight scholl students to students avademic.
    3. Commitment to becoming an ideal student academic.

    Topic Sentence
    1.Self-development is a key factor in achieving academic success for students.
    2. The transition from high school to academic life represents a significant shift in students' responsibilities and expectations.
    3. Commitment is the cornerstone of becoming an ideal student academic, driving motivation and persistence.


    1.Naufal (042)
    2. Arif (040)
    3.Anggi (036)

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  7. RizalOctober 2, 2023 at 7:04 AM

    Theme : dengerous pornography


    Main ideas:

    "The danger of pornography for the future."

    Topic Sentence:

    "For the future, pornography is very dangerous for the young generation, the nation's future successors."


    Name : Muhammad Fatihurrizal
    Nim : 23030220001
    Class : 3A-TBI

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